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Chapter One

Confused and walking in the rain… Mina Harper was wondering why she had been kicked out of the Count's castle so soon.
Some tears were starting to come down her eyes and this time she did not even blame the rain.
Mina was just confused… so she continued to walk alone in the rain and she opened the door and her older sister, Lucy, came.
"Well…?" Lucy said, being eager to see The Count again.  
"He can't come." Mina said to her sister and started to go upstairs to her room.
Mina sat on her bed; she was starting to have memories of when the Count and her first met.
Mina knew she had to get back there somehow. How, though? She is only seven years old and The Count is seven-hundred years old.
What could a young, fun, silly, seven year old do?
Mina sighed, not knowing on what to do.
Then, a bright flash of lightning came and that is when it hit her. 'School…!' She forgot she had school.
Mina grabbed her backpack and started to walk to school, well there is a good side to school now; Nick won't make fun of her anymore, yet, still she felt lost without her best friend that could do so much than she could do.
The school day went bye faster than it usually went. Mina couldn't help it she wanted to see her friend again… have some good times…
"It's all Igor's fault!" Mina cried once she was alone in her room, and sat on her beanie seat, same face and attitude when Nick made fun of her.
Then she remembered on what The Count had said when she started to punch her beanie, "Now Mina, physical violence isn't the answer… psychological domination is the name of the game!"
Mina lightly chuckled when she remembered her reply, "Pyschologi—who?"
Then, she got an idea.
A brilliant idea that her friend—or used to be friend—Igor came up with when The Count was in trouble, because friends are always by each's other sides, right?
Mina started to look for the makeup… once she found it, she put it in her backpack and was ready to head out… until…
Lucy came in. "How come?" she asked.
"How am I supposed to know?!" Mina nearly shouted, she wanted to know the answer too.
"Well, you need to find out."
"Stop being so goofy!" Mina said, grabbed her backpack and started to walk to… where is she going to be more exactly?
Well, whever she was going, she'll know what to do then… or at least… she hopes she will…
Walking in the rain once again, Mina heads out to The Count's castle, hoping that Igor has left, but he probably hasn't.
Mina was a confused seven year old child indeed…
Here it is!
My continued version of "Mina and the Count" I hope all of you will like it as much as I do!

( Let me point this out before I forget...
On Microsoft Word, the font color is different that's how you can tell whose perspective is whose... but instead I'll do this:
I'll have a preview picture of the character )

:D :D :D :D !ENJOY! :D :D :D :D
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:iconjustaanothertean:
Justaanothertean Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nice Job here
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yasminopalcaster Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks :meow:
I just wish it was just a tiny bit longer... but oh well :meow:
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Justaanothertean Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well it was your first chapter so its forgiveble and the later chapters where good still not perfeckt but good so keep on working and good luck
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yasminopalcaster Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks :meow:
im glad you like it you should check out "The Story of Ashley Pattison" when you're done reading "Mina and the Count -- Continued Story" (its not DONE done... :/)
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Justaanothertean Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know most storys arent fully done but I will check your other stuff you're a good writer and im makeing my own stuff and I look up to many writers such as your self. Keep up the good work
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yasminopalcaster Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh my goodness :meow:
i cant wait to read other peoples work :meow:
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Justaanothertean Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Then shall I tell you when the chapter is done?
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yasminopalcaster Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
how about a few chapters :meow:
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VampiraLady Jun 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it's nice :)
and sowwy about Igor, Mina. lol
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yasminopalcaster Jun 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks :D hehe lolz
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